As you all know I have a daily haiku meme weblog at Google’s called ‘Carpe Diem’. On that weblog I give an every day prompt. This month the daily prompts are all Classical Japanese Kigo (seasonwords) and today Oborozuki (hazy moon) is the prompt.
I have already read wonderfully composed haiku on this prompt and I love to share here another haiku written by myself.
cherry blossoms bloom
in the light of the hazy moon
looking mysterious
looking mysterious
in the twilight light of the hazy moon
blooming cherry trees
Well … what do you think? I love this set … I love that mysterious sight of the cherry blossoms in vague light of the hazy moon, looks somewhat like that the blossoms are hiding behind the veil.
behind the veil
of the midnight light of the hazy moon
hides cherry blossom
Awesome!
See you another day … Namaste …
You almost combined this with Hanagumori.
That would be a double haze
Cheers!
JzB
Everything assumes an air of mystery under a hazy moon!
Hazy Moon
the hazy moon does give the nite a mysterious aura….my favorite is the last – ‘behind the veil….’
hazy moon sounds mysterious, and I assume it is a humid part of the year in some areas. Here in Sweden we have no hazy moon at the moment
there’s some mystery in them! the allure of night!
aloha Kristjaan. yes, you have caught this magic and mystery well and with surprise for me. i like that a lot. this is one of those wow, i wish i had come to this in my own haiku moments. beautiful. aloha.
I love your Haiku challenges and your composed haiku. I have never been good at poetry, but haiku is a small form that I might be able to handle. Thank you for liking my Edge of the Forest and the In trutina post. I am happy to have found your blog.