It has been a while, but I am trying to revive not only my daily haiku meme Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, but also my personal weblogs. At Carpe Diem Haiku Kai we are exploring classical and non-classical kigo (seasonwords) for summer and today that kigo (a classical one) is Hiyazake (or cold saké) and this is my response on that kigo:
drinking cold sake
on the porch of a mountain hut –
the almost full moon
In this haiku I also have tried to use the so called “fragment and phrase” technique, maybe you have heard of it.