Yesterday, October 15th, the Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2017 has started. The ‘retreat’ is a period of 30 days and the challenge is to write Japanese poetry every day. This Winter Retreat 2017 is themed “life is beautiful”.
Here is my 2nd poem for this ‘retreat’:
shimmers in the light of dawn
dewdrops of winter
See you …
What a beautiful day we had here in The Netherlands, a was warm and moist and it felt awesome, but I was sweating as … Than tonight it started to rain, the warmth left and the earth came alive again … ah that perfume of wet earth … I like that. It inspired me to create the following haiku:
the warmth gone
See you …
Yesterday (july 15th) the Autumn Retreat 2017 has started. As you all know I am hosting Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, a daily meme, and I try to create four times a year a “retreat” and now it’s time for the autumn retreat 2017. This time the theme is “departure”, a theme that fits the autumn retreat like a glove.
Here is my first offering for this autumn retreat, two tanka themed departure:
in deep silence willow leaves fall –
tears on this grave
as the willow is green again
another year has gone
deep dark forest
seeking for nature’s mysteries –
a new day rises
after a hot and steamy night
she departs … without a kiss
Well … I hope you did like the read …. see you tomorrow.
Hiyazake (cold saké)
It has been a while, but I am trying to revive not only my daily haiku meme Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, but also my personal weblogs. At Carpe Diem Haiku Kai we are exploring classical and non-classical kigo (seasonwords) for summer and today that kigo (a classical one) is Hiyazake (or cold saké) and this is my response on that kigo:
drinking cold sake
on the porch of a mountain hut –
the almost full moon
In this haiku I also have tried to use the so called “fragment and phrase” technique, maybe you have heard of it.
I am so glad to bring you another one of my submissions to the 2017 Summer Retreat of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, my daily haiku-meme. This year’s Summer Retreat the theme is (unconditional) love and that’s a very broad range for inspiration.
As haiku poets we are one with nature. Haiku is about that one moment of joy as short as the sound of a pebble thrown in water. Without love for nature (I think) you cannot be a real haiku poet. So today I love to share a haiku with you which I once wrote inspired on a haiku by Basho (1644-1694). I think this haiku is also as renown as his “old pond” haiku. So here it goes:
This the haiku by Basho (in a translation by Barnhill):
yoku mireba nazuna hana saku kakine kana
a shepherd’s purse blossoming
beneath the hedge
© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Barnhill)
And this is the haiku I once created inspired on this real beauty by Basho:
trembles in the summer breeze –
bees seek for honey
A nice one I think (how immodest) and in it you can find (unconditional) love too I think. We have to love nature even a little herb like Shepherd’s purse. It is worth to look at it and appreciate it. It’s part of nature.
And of course in a way “bees seek for honey” is very clear about (unconditional) love, so I think this haiku fits our Summer Retreat theme.
See you …