Good day dear friends and followers,
I had to share a new post on my wordpress weblog. Carpe Diem’s new month has started and today I have a new episode posted there of the feature “Make this haiku complete”, in which the goal is to complete a haiku which is given. This episode it’s the next incomplete haiku … I have only the first two lines and I have to write the third. Here it comes:
chanting and humming
gongs immerse the green valley –
the babbling brook
The first two were given and the third I wrote.
I think it has become a wonderful haiku and not at least by my third line. I can see, hear and smell the imagery in this haiku. must be a lovely place to be and visit. It must be magical and mysterious at that place. Well … until another day.
Namaste
Chèvrefeuille's haiku 
Wonderful haiku with that 3rd line – the sounds the brook makes through the valley.
Yes, that’s really good, you’ve evoked the atmosphere
that brook completes not only the haiku, but also the place created by the first lines….I really enjoy these completion challenges, and reading everyone’s work!
It’s always a joy to compose new lines to the Tan Renga.
Thank you Emma … it’s a pleasure.
Wonderful observation Joanne. Thank you for your kind words. Makes me blush 🙂
very nice – the thought of a babbling brook fused with man-made sounds.