A very nicely created set of Squared Tan Renga
Squared Tan Renga #1
three raindrops
a greeting card from heaven…
midsummer heat (Issa)
three slowly trickling teardrops
wishing you were here with me
wishes and feathers
falling from the clearest sky
colour of your eyes
blurring with raindrops and tears
start of a summer rainstorm
Squared Tan Renga #2
flying away
following the rainbow
into heaven (Chèvrefeuille)
a cote of doves free to fly
in flurries of white feathers
flying away
a monochrome explosion
of feathers and souls
soaking colour from the sky
following the rainbow
Kim M. Russell, 2017
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My response to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge weekend-meditation #1 raindrops
In September’s weekend meditations, we are starting with Tan Renga: a short renga created by two poets. The first stanza consists of three lines (hokku) and the second stanza of two lines (ageku), which is inspired by images in the first stanza.
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Chèvrefeuille's haiku 
This is truly wise, because you describe the real nature of spirituality where we ought to follow the path naturally, that which does not leave a track like the movement of a bird in the sky.
Quite beautifully written.